"Have you ever forgot
about your keys, or wallet while walking out to your car? Have your kids ever whined
that they can’t find their stuffed animal? The stuffed animal that they take
everywhere with them. My name is Zac Hoeper and my idea is a hardware device
that will allow you to never lose or forget about your keys, wallet, or
personal belonging ever again. It works off a Bluetooth signal that identifies
exactly where the object last was. It makes it easy for you to understand that
you are about to forget about your belonging. The app that comes with the
hardware will push notifications to your phone when you get too far from belongings.
This will help in reminding you not to forget about it. It is for those people
who always misplace their things. it is easily installable to all objects, it
will have a hole for key chains, it is small and thin enough for wallets and
lightweight enough to not weigh your personal belongings down. Other
competitors have noises that let you know exactly where your hardware devices
are but my idea it will just give you simple notification with a location that
doesn’t disrupt or make inconvenience. My idea is the best way to bring back
the things you love."
I changed some of the wording that felt lengthened my pitch and also gave it more depth. The comments on my last last pitch was all positive and so nothing really changed from that. Even though I still feel a little nervous while making these, I do feel more confident in speaking in this last pitch than the others.
Zac, great job on this elevator pitch! As I said last time, I loved how you included props in your video to include a visual aid to keep the audience interested. You definitely seemed comfortable and confident while talking about your idea which goes a long way in selling something. Also, your closing line was perfect because it made the pitch personal and allowed your entire audience to connect to what you were saying. Great job!!
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