I did not receive feedback on my first elevator pitch so I tried to make adjustments how I saw fit when trying to make it better. I used props to make it a little bit clearer on what my product would help solve. I tried to sway less while on camera since I noticed I tend to do that a lot when nervous.
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Hi Zac! I thought your elevator pitch was great! I loved how you included props like your wallet and a stuffed animal to emphasize your idea. Also, you did a great job with your opening getting people hooked and keeping us interested. Your ending line was very effective as well because you made it personal and relatable for everyone. Great work!
ReplyDeleteI think you did a great job with your elevator pitch! I really liked that you used props in your pitch, and I think it really helped me understand your concept and also made the pitch more fun and engaging. I also liked how you ending your pitch; I thought it was really well spoken. Overall, I think you did a fantastic job!
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